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Within
Contributed by
Cordell
on
Friday, 13th August 2004 @ 03:23:23 AM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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Its all because of you
Im dying in my room
You broken my heart again
Got me confused
You said Im someone you can lose
But you leave me flat again
What am I suppose to do, I gave you my all
All these memories of you, and now I lay and fall
Into a deepness of the darkest part of me
Where as a child I hid from everybody
You slammed the door
To many times before
A fight you though youd had to win
Do I go on
With nothing to hold on
If I die tonight will it be a sin
I wont let you win
Within, within
Copyright ©
Cordell
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2004-08-13 03:23:23]
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Re: Within
(User Rating: 1 )
by Blackevar on
Friday, 31st December 2004 @ 06:56:12 AM AEST
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Hi Cordell,
I really like your poem. THis is way better than most of the moaney crap on this site. It's a beautiful description of the eternal internal monologue.
Do I stay or do I go...
Spite is as good a reason to carry on and I think you made your point succinctly.
Regards Blackevar. |
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