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damaging me
Contributed by
valek
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Friday, 13th August 2004 @ 12:54:18 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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with the wings of a moth
i flew towards you the light
you the light burning so bright
burning out sight
the closer i get to you
the more damaged i become
still killing myself for the one i love so true
with the broken wings of a moth
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2004-08-13 12:54:18]
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Re: damaging me
(User Rating: 1 )
by Poe on
Friday, 13th August 2004 @ 01:50:28 PM AEST
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I like this a lot. I feel you.
Poe |
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Re: damaging me
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 14th August 2004 @ 05:28:29 AM AEST
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I'm with Poe. You have talent, valek.
I like this and feel this more than they. For sure.
Keep writing. |
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Re: damaging me
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by blackholesun on
Saturday, 2nd October 2004 @ 02:34:30 PM AEST
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| loved it good write!i feel fragile sometimes too. |
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