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Heart exposed
Contributed by
carmen_queasy
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Friday, 13th August 2004 @ 01:43:19 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Senses fail
The drive to succeed
And this is where you stood in front of me
Whispering into the night
I feel like a disease
The emotion in your voice brings me to my knees
I'm envisioning you now like a mirror image
You holding my heart in your blood drenched grasp
Is that how youll make sure this bloody romance will last?
My twisted dream
Your heart is mine
And I will rip yours out this time
I create
I stand to see
As every atom of your beauty seems to choke me
I'm envisioning you now like a mirror image
You, holding my heart in your blood drenched grasp
Passion within your fingertips. I fell so fast.
Your heart is blue, your heart is new
My heart is the heart that belongs to the fool
Your heart is black, under attack
My heart is yours, dont give it back
Lover sleeps beneath these sheets
Mine is a heart that no longer beats
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Re: Heart exposed
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by pixie on
Friday, 13th August 2004 @ 01:46:04 PM AEST
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wow, this is great. 5/5
pixie xx |
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Re: Heart exposed
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by positivelypurple on
Sunday, 29th August 2004 @ 03:04:41 PM AEST
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Whoa! This one gave me chills. Wonderful work.
-Laurel |
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Re: Heart exposed
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by blackholesun on
Saturday, 2nd October 2004 @ 02:59:20 PM AEST
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| oh my god i loved the deathdrop ending verry smoothe! |
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