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Just a dream with a fairytale ending.
Contributed by
mindancer
on
Friday, 13th August 2004 @ 02:21:18 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Fairytale endings, shattered dreams.
A young woman lost in a world thats not as it seemed.
She lost herself sometime years ago.
How she let that happen no one will ever know.
Her heart is broken, lying on the floor.
She builds a wall around her heart, never will it be as it was open before.
It tears her apart the pain thats shes felt.
All because of you and the hell you've put her threw.
As days go by the hope of having a real man by herside subsides.
So as the days pass little by little her feelings go numb, slowly shes dying inside.
All she wants is to be happy, find a love thats never ending.
But i guess thats just her dreaming of that fairytale ending.
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2004-08-13 14:21:18]
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Re: Just a dream with a fairytale ending.
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 13th August 2004 @ 02:39:00 PM AEST
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| Good description of what happens. And *each time* a heart gets broken, it is even less likely that it will be open enough to find what it needs... |
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Re: Just a dream with a fairytale ending.
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by CaddishCut on
Friday, 13th August 2004 @ 06:31:14 PM AEST
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| Definitely...I've tried moving on from my boyfriend, but I just don't think I can trust another like I did him. |
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Re: Just a dream with a fairytale ending.
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by afterdark on
Sunday, 29th August 2004 @ 06:34:01 PM AEST
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Very good write..
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Re: Just a dream with a fairytale ending.
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by blackholesun on
Saturday, 2nd October 2004 @ 03:11:08 PM AEST
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| i liked it keep up the good work! |
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