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The Cliffs Edge
Contributed by
Kirby
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Friday, 13th August 2004 @ 03:02:45 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Looking down that cliff
I can't see the bottom.
Edging closer to the edge
My heart starts to pound.
My hands begin to sweat
Can I really jump off?
Now knowing where I will end up
I pull myself back.
Turning away I walk to safety
But something over the edge calls to me
"Come be with me forever."
"I'm your future, just jump, jump, jump."
The voice begs to me softly
Should I really jump?
If I do, can I live with my decision.
So I turn around to the cliff
My minds set on jumping off the edge.
So I run full speed and...jump.
"I love you" I scream with only air under me.
Then you catch me on your Cloud 9.
"See, saying I love you wasn't so hard."
As we float away I look back at that cliff.
Jumping was so hard, but I'm glad that I did.
NowI can move on...onto you.
I love you and that's no lie.
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Kirby
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2004-08-13 15:02:45]
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Re: The Cliffs Edge
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by Nazmythian on
Friday, 13th August 2004 @ 03:13:38 PM AEST
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That decision gets harder and harder to make as we grow older, I pray your cloud floats over calm colorful sunsets for all time. A well written poem.
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Re: The Cliffs Edge
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by Freda_Burrel on
Saturday, 14th August 2004 @ 09:38:09 AM AEST
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| well written ... |
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