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Tenacity
Contributed by
CARAAAAA
on
Friday, 13th August 2004 @ 04:13:57 PM in AEST
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This one presumptiously celestial apparition
beseiged me in my besotted state
that day in full furore
and scintillating colours that acrid tastes shun.
All projected, the beam of distance impeded light
vacillating, quivering from within.
Directing his incumbant gaze at me
Intensity within a marginal streamlined spectrum
Illusions illicited, entwined, pihrouette with grace
Oh , but a piercing gaze I do not attest to
nor aim for , imbibed
with senseless shards of ambition,
he told me.
I am but half the man I used to be ,
he told me.
The sheer translucency of my
deviant half,
oscillating yet swooning bearing the brunt of imbalance
made me shed an unconcious tear that night,
he told me.
What is this peculiarity
he asked me.
Is this physical attribute of pain interminable?
He inquired coquettishly yet
visibly ramshackled and flailing within
sighing gestures.
Oh but where and what is your gaze?
I asked.
A protruderance of rhetoric questions
glimmering like a brandished sword
under the forward thrust of the seemingly lucid sun.
Harsh reflections honed from the
ambivalant looking glass.
Just like this
just for a brief moment,
oh convoluted counsel.
Copyright ©
CARAAAAA
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2004-08-13 16:13:57]
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Re: Tenacity
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by ALineAboveTheStepBeneath on
Monday, 4th October 2004 @ 12:18:35 PM AEST
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