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I'm in paradise
Contributed by
corrupted_minds
on
Saturday, 14th August 2004 @ 12:05:02 AM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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My tears are lost in the pouring rain,
So nobody notices Im feeling this pain,
They all keep going like everythings the same,
Still lying in the shower with blood down the drain,
It was my choice, my own desire,
To fall to hell and burn in fire,
I said I was okay, I admit Im a lyer,
My lifes for sale and I dont have a buyer,
From the moment right before we kissed,
I knew when I was gone I would never be missed,
Ill use your blunt knife to slit my wrist,
And send back to you in a letter so you knew I exist,
In the letter in my blood Ill write,
To tell you how my daytimes night,
The thought of death was my only light,
And after death I would then have sight,
Ive washed my scar with dirty soap,
Id made the knot, Id tied the rope,
With this life I couldnt cope,
With no creed, and with no hope,
Crimson roses will flood your dreams,
And then youll re-live my painful screams,
When you wake nothings what it seems,
You could of saved me is what this all means,
Ive lived my life, wouldnt do it twice,
Ive had it hard, havent had it nice,
I gave my life, Ive paid the price,
And now I can see, Im in paradise
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Re: I'm in paradise
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by CaddishCut on
Saturday, 14th August 2004 @ 12:09:43 AM AEST
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Re: I'm in paradise
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by Dizza_13 on
Saturday, 14th August 2004 @ 01:40:14 AM AEST
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great work. Another heart filled write.
love always, dizza
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Re: I'm in paradise
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by pixie on
Saturday, 14th August 2004 @ 10:24:15 AM AEST
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an amazing write, such a way with words you have
pixie xx |
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