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Jym
Contributed by
willow_tara72002
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Saturday, 14th August 2004 @ 10:05:22 AM in AEST
Topic:
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It took me 6 months to write this, its how i feel
Believe me when i say this poems real
i ask how you are,
Always you say fine
Every single time
I know that your lying
I can look past your fake smile
Thats stretched for a mile
It only lasts for a while
Why should i care about you?
I cant help you anyways
Why bother thinking of you
Cause i dont know what true
You want me to not care but i do
I worry so much everyday
Wishing you wouldnt hurt yourself
I do the same now, and i miss you so
You were always there everytime
And you know you can never say " your mine"
I held you close and hugged you as you cried
i can never say i really tried
i turned my back on you when you needed me
Did I just " use and abuse"?
I know it was me who put out the fuse,
Of our friendship
im so sorry for the things i did
Sorry i avoided and ignored you
Im a bad person i know,
So dont say im not
I relize now how much i love you
I miss you and the things we did
The way we get kicked out of places together
The way we check out girls that wear leather
The way we joke and play
We were seen and were together everyday
I see now the error of my ways
i cant wait to get you back
i need you everyday, its a fact
Your friendship again is what i must win
I love you, I need you, My best friend Jym.
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Re: Jym
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by buchi on
Sunday, 3rd October 2004 @ 05:31:45 PM AEST
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| Touching, warm, very humane...it was worth the six months it took to pen this thoughful poem... |
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Re: Jym
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by ALineAboveTheStepBeneath on
Tuesday, 5th October 2004 @ 03:20:52 PM AEST
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| The six months of thought put into this poem show... It looks like it was worth the time. |
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Re: Jym
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by TedHuggableBare on
Thursday, 4th November 2004 @ 10:01:43 PM AEST
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| You need to let Jym know where to find this poem by sending a link. You took the six months to finally pen it, so don't wait another six months to finally show it. Go for it! |
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