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A scent of respect
Contributed by
inoc
on
Saturday, 14th August 2004 @ 06:10:54 PM in AEST
Topic:
happypoetry
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I know this extraudinary lady
who seems to make me laugh
I see her usually once a week
she honestly deserves a plaugh
she is always happy
always jolly
there should be more like her
she has a heart of gold you see
she'd give hers to you
in a trlfle
she has a sore on her leg
the doctor says
rest is best
so while doing her dishes
she has her sore leg
up there near her chest!
while I am helping her today
I feel
gee my neck 's all wet
I turn around to see her
hidden in her hands
she has the perfume spray I bet
so for the rest of the day
I must say
I had a trail of sweet smelling scent
it made me smile
and brightened my day
as the aroma
was heavenly lent
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inoc
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2004-08-14 18:10:54]
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Re: A scent of respect
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 14th August 2004 @ 07:00:54 PM AEST
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I love this piece. Children and the elderly are so much fun. My mom lives with me and we visit a lot of her friends and they visit with us. They are a laugh a minute. Great write from a great heart.
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Re: A scent of respect
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by Jenni_K on
Saturday, 14th August 2004 @ 07:58:22 PM AEST
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Lovely write..thanks for the smiles....
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Re: A scent of respect
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by Katie2008 on
Saturday, 14th August 2004 @ 08:19:59 PM AEST
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lol! aww, this is so sweet! Wonderful write!
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