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If One Day
Contributed by
faith_my_eyes
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Saturday, 14th August 2004 @ 11:03:45 PM in AEST
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For the touch of your hand
Caressing my cheek
What a whisper of your undying love
Will arise from in deep
How your lips would taste
Would they be sweet
If one day
Ours would meet...
But not now.
For mind, soul, and spirit
To melt as one
To seek love
From the One who gave it
Together.
Forever molded
From the work of His hands
A beautiful replica
Of He and His bride...
But not yet.
To have your love
As my own
And my life
In your hands to hold
To be at your side forevermore
For us to meander life's path together
To share each turn and twist
Not alone
But together
As one....
Maybe someday.
If ever this day comes
That love may have us meet as one
Your heart as mine
My heart as yours
Whenever this day comes...
I am ready.
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Re: If One Day
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by Fionndruinne on
Saturday, 14th August 2004 @ 11:33:31 PM AEST
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Pathetic as Wachumiri? Impossible!
Nice piece. Very sensitive. And I do hope it will come indeed for you. Slàn gu dearbh.
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Re: If One Day
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by SocialMisfit on
Sunday, 15th August 2004 @ 12:43:12 AM AEST
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| dont worry i have felt that way also but i have found with my faith a realization that if i was ment to have a person to love he would provide so just have faith. |
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Re: If One Day
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by inoc on
Sunday, 15th August 2004 @ 08:45:40 AM AEST
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watch out that Mr Somebody-oneday hey...
what a lot of love inside your soul
you release it in this nice write!
cheers! |
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Re: If One Day
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by secretwind on
Sunday, 15th August 2004 @ 09:54:51 AM AEST
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| Oh yea baby it sounds like you are ready....well written. |
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Re: If One Day
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by Puppy_dog_eyes on
Sunday, 15th August 2004 @ 03:22:48 PM AEST
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One day a knight will ride into your world and sweep you off your feet.
Look out for someone on a white horse, lol
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Re: If One Day
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by Wachumiri on
Wednesday, 8th September 2004 @ 04:40:39 PM AEST
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I agree with Andrew, it's not THAT pathetic. It is actually a very beautiful poem. It brings out all the beauty in your heart in an unbelievable way.
I have but one question. Have you shown it to him? Ok, you're probably right, it's not the right time for that.
Take care.
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Re: If One Day
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by Silent-No-More on
Saturday, 11th September 2004 @ 11:37:54 PM AEST
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This is lovely. It is, unfortunately, what many take for granted when they have it. It is without it, perhaps, that we see it - every bit of it - as so clearly wonderful.
Very nicely done!
Feeling rather pathetic myself at times,
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Re: If One Day
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by Overstated on
Monday, 13th September 2004 @ 04:09:24 PM AEST
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wow i thought this poem was very very good indeed. 'If ever this day comes
That love may have us meet as one' - nice line!
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Re: If One Day
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by Nezenic on
Monday, 4th October 2004 @ 02:39:55 PM AEST
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| I hope you find the one for you. We are born with a pair of eyes and ears, but the reason we are only born with one heart is that we are meant to search for the second one in order to complete the pair. |
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Re: If One Day
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Monday, 17th October 2005 @ 10:10:10 PM AEST
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Emily this is so beautifully written. It really stood out for me. Your heart shines radinatly through this brilliant poem. You can express yourself so well and u know exactly what u want. May the person who captures ur heart treat it with the utmost love and respect that it truly deserves.
*hugs*
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