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I Breathe In and Breathe Out Only You
Contributed by
Breezer08
on
Sunday, 15th August 2004 @ 12:55:08 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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My sun sets on your horizon
And your moonlight dances across my ocean shores
We are on the edge of love
And its straight down from here
But your angelic wings will lift us up
And I'll have the strength to breathe again
Society won't leave us alone
They want to take my ecstacy away
But who can touch a love so pure?
Who can steal our determination?
Your essence is my oxygen
Your taste satisfies my thirst
Your eyes open my soul
And no one can hold me like you.
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Breezer08
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2004-08-15 00:55:08]
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Re: I Breathe In and Breathe Out Only You
(User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on
Sunday, 15th August 2004 @ 03:03:00 AM AEST
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A heavenly awesome write.
Society, leave them at their own demise!
luv, huggs, smiles,
emy |
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Re: I Breathe In and Breathe Out Only You
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by inoc on
Sunday, 15th August 2004 @ 07:10:44 AM AEST
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""Your essence is my oxygen
your taste satisfies my thirst"""
I love that part...
you chose those words wonderfully
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