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passion in those eyes
Contributed by
paula_kay23
on
Sunday, 15th August 2004 @ 06:12:32 PM in AEST
Topic:
LoveRemembered
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he made me look him in the eye
i hesitently done as he said
suddenly lost my sense of self
started liking where i was led
getting lost in the moment
taking the chemistry in
letting the feeling seduce me
letting my good self sin
found myself leaning closer
needing those lips on mine
sinking deeper into them
feeling helpless but divine
im reaching out with my fingertips
touching his soft sweet skin
he is doing the same
moving me from within
gentle and caressing hands
moving, making me moan
passion taking it further
while he and i are alone
now feeling overwhelmed
as we lay entwined
trembling with desire
with this love of mine
suddenly still, we embrace
hear the echo of ecstatic cries
and i could lay for a life time
looking in those seductive eyes
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Re: passion in those eyes
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by xxbreathlessx on
Sunday, 15th August 2004 @ 06:22:12 PM AEST
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| wow i loved it. those descriptions were absolutly amazing. incredible poem. |
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Re: passion in those eyes
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by Nazmythian on
Sunday, 15th August 2004 @ 06:38:51 PM AEST
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A very pleasant read, well worded. Nicely done
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Re: passion in those eyes
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by Jenni_K on
Sunday, 15th August 2004 @ 08:58:57 PM AEST
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Tastefully sensual... Welcome to YPDC....
Looking forward to reading more of your work..
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