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Sleepless Ponderings
Contributed by
unforgiven
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Monday, 16th August 2004 @ 04:12:31 AM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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I hate you,
Why do you make me feel so bad?
I'm so tired but I can't sleep,
My eyes are stinging,
My cheeks are wet.
You used me again,
My mascara's starting to run.
Black eyes for black heart,
So many questions,
No answers given.
My head is pounding,
Nose is running.
Crying for you,
I know you don't deserve it.
My heart's in pain,
My head in turmoil.
Tears flowing freely,
This feeling won't go away,
Somebody save me.
Drowning in tears,
Please keep me from this pain.
Tired of this emotion,
Restore my heart,
It's been broken.
Please somebody fix me,
I don't want to hurt again.
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unforgiven
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2004-08-16 04:12:31]
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Re: Sleepless Ponderings
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 16th August 2004 @ 05:59:51 PM AEST
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Its a compelling expulsion of raw emotion, which I find I've heard before somewhere . . . from someone . . . perhaps not as concise or poetic, but I think they'd understand this one. As do I.
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Re: Sleepless Ponderings
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by Stitch on
Tuesday, 28th September 2004 @ 08:15:03 AM AEST
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The poetry is flowing freely and you're writing good stuff. The fixing takes a lot longer. If you allow it to happen, gradually, you will grow stronger, but we all fall down on the way to that strength. Keep writing.
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Re: Sleepless Ponderings
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by a_bear on
Tuesday, 28th September 2004 @ 09:33:32 AM AEST
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| me again..sorry now aren't you? lol. I'm devotaing my entire morning to you. I like this. It's very discriptive. I often want someone to fix me too.. |
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Re: Sleepless Ponderings
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by Delusions on
Wednesday, 29th September 2004 @ 08:27:12 PM AEST
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| i like this one alot!!! how often does one feel like u'll never be whole again... like u need sumone to cum along n pick up all ur peices n put u back together... ive relied on others for so long to do this... but lately ive realised... ive gotta put myself back together... hahaha n stop the alcomohol from magnifying my situations =oP lolz Great write tho!!! u rule xoxox ~cRuNcHiE~ |
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Re: Sleepless Ponderings
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by Deleterious_Dislike on
Sunday, 24th October 2004 @ 07:12:09 AM AEST
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Relating to poems is good, but bad..
I can relate to this, too well i think
The last two lines made my scars open
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