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Never fall again
Contributed by
corrupted_minds
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Monday, 16th August 2004 @ 06:35:13 AM in AEST
Topic:
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Come to me, and stay with me,
Sleep the night, and let us be,
Hold me close, and wipe my tears,
Let our love erase our fears,
You stole my heart, it's your for life,
Take my hand, I'll be your wife,
Kiss my lips, and hold me tight,
And hope my love we never fight,
Lift me up against the wall,
Put your body close so I'll never fall,
Let our heart just run free,
Show the world together we see,
He put together my heart of two,
Wiped my tears when I was blue,
When I wanted to bleed you gave me the blade,
Together as one we ran from the shade,
We shared our pain, It's all been done,
Together over death we've won,
When I fell, He took my hand,
And there as one we were to stand,
He picked me up when I started to run,
Two broken wings would fly as one,
This night doesnt make this perfect,
neither does this life,
But I know it's true,
It's me and you,
and together we'll never fall
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Re: Never fall again
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by cj_ranson on
Monday, 16th August 2004 @ 06:43:27 AM AEST
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awesome, reel good loretta
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Re: Never fall again
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by alecfernadez on
Monday, 16th August 2004 @ 07:53:01 AM AEST
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| this is a beautiful love poem, and its brilliantly written. This should be an example for what love poetry should be. Brilliant write, a work of pure emotional art |
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Re: Never fall again
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by Nnenna on
Monday, 16th August 2004 @ 10:45:41 AM AEST
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| Great poem!! Excellent. |
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Re: Never fall again
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by AndreaJ on
Monday, 16th August 2004 @ 02:27:57 PM AEST
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wow, powerful.....
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Re: Never fall again
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by Dizza_13 on
Tuesday, 17th August 2004 @ 02:17:29 AM AEST
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great write loz. Beautiful
love always, dizza
xoxoxox |
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Re: Never fall again
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by amber1988 on
Wednesday, 25th August 2004 @ 08:48:52 AM AEST
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| awesome write. this is how love is supposed to be. |
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Re: Never fall again
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by Spazzo on
Tuesday, 14th September 2004 @ 09:42:17 PM AEST
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| Great write. Very beautiful. |
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