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Up All Night
Contributed by
Kevin
on
Monday, 16th August 2004 @ 10:57:23 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Up All Night
Cant sleep, dont know what to do,
Im awake all night, thinking of you.
Clock strikes one.
I cant blame you, you dont even know,
I wanted to tell, but I couldnt show.
Clock strikes two.
You dont know what you mean to me,
You have no idea, you just cant see.
Clock strikes three.
I wanted to be with you, and just hold your hand,
I wanted to be yours, wanted to be your man.
Clock strikes four.
Its four in the morning, Im still awake,
Get out of my head for goodness sakes.
Clock strikes five.
You found someone else, I dont know who,
If he makes you cry, I know what Ill do.
Clock strikes six.
Ill hurt him, and make him cry.
You deserve the best, the best damn guy.
Clock strikes seven.
Another night gone, thinking of you.
I cant go on much longer, dont know what to do.
Ill get up now, and go along with the day,
But one more thing I have to say.
I would die for you, so you dont feel pain,
The guy youre with now better feel the same.
If he hurts you, he will pay,
I will make sure he doesnt see another day.
I will love you always, and that will remain the same,
For Im stuck in this life, this stupid game.
Copyright ©
Kevin
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2004-08-16 10:57:23]
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Re: Up All Night
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by Ms_superior on
Monday, 16th August 2004 @ 11:26:20 AM AEST
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| this was a very good poem. I hope the female realizes how much you love her. Good luck in future relationships |
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Re: Up All Night
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by joshnholly4ever on
Monday, 16th August 2004 @ 11:48:15 AM AEST
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| I loved it!!! I hope whoever the poem is about finds out how much she means to you.GREAT poem. |
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Re: Up All Night
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by joshnholly4ever on
Monday, 16th August 2004 @ 11:48:26 AM AEST
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| I loved it!!! I hope whoever the poem is about finds out how much she means to you.GREAT poem. |
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Re: Up All Night
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by joshnholly4ever on
Monday, 16th August 2004 @ 11:48:40 AM AEST
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| I loved it!!! I hope whoever the poem is about finds out how much she means to you.GREAT poem. |
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Re: Up All Night
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by joshnholly4ever on
Monday, 16th August 2004 @ 11:49:07 AM AEST
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| I loved it!!! I hope whoever the poem is about finds out how much she means to you.GREAT poem. |
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Re: Up All Night
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by yellow_sundragon on
Monday, 16th August 2004 @ 01:00:08 PM AEST
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Kevin, this is a very good write, and I love the idea of having the clock strike throughout the poem....
And I have had many sleepless nights thinking over the same things...
Jaime |
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Re: Up All Night
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by Jenni_K on
Monday, 16th August 2004 @ 03:11:21 PM AEST
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This is so well done...The idea of the clock striking at each hour is fabulous...adds a lot to the poem....
Jenni |
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Re: Up All Night
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 16th August 2004 @ 03:16:20 PM AEST
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| clever format, loved the clock. Nice job. |
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Re: Up All Night
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by N0body on
Monday, 29th November 2004 @ 06:29:10 PM AEST
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| *snff* So beautiful!!! I love your poetry!!..its to touching...it makes me want to cry.. :-) |
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Re: Up All Night
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by Nardo on
Wednesday, 15th December 2004 @ 06:58:45 PM AEST
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GENIUS!!!!!!!!!!!
GREAT idea!
WOW! |
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