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My Heart
Contributed by
joshnholly4ever
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Monday, 16th August 2004 @ 12:06:29 PM in AEST
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My heart was taken by you
When I first met you I thought you were the one
You were so sweet and kind
My heart was broken by you
I loved you with all my heart
When you told me that you were leaving I thought you were going to end it right there
But you looked at me and said we'll make it work I promise
My heart is in pieces because of you
When I found out there was someone else the only thing I could do was cry
You promised me you wouldn't
You said you couldn't because I was your only one
My heart was taken by you, broken by you and now it's in pieces because of you
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2004-08-16 12:06:29]
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Re: My Heart
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by pixie on
Monday, 16th August 2004 @ 12:31:46 PM AEST
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awww I am sorry to hear this, it is his loss, a very pained and raw write *hugs*
pixie xx |
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Re: My Heart
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by starryskyez09 on
Monday, 16th August 2004 @ 12:52:39 PM AEST
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| Oh my gosh. i am terribly sorry. But that would be his' loss not yours, if he's made this decision to be with another girl and not you. Your probably too good for him anywayz!! I love how you wrote this poem, how it flowed and how you showed the reader how you felt and how everything happened. Very good and I hope you feel better soon!! |
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