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Will You Miss Us
Contributed by
cheech
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Monday, 16th August 2004 @ 03:12:48 PM in AEST
Topic:
FathersDayPoems
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If we say good-bye will you die will you miss us and put up a fuss
Dear dad, would you care if we left or will you say''thats not fair"
we're not deaf we can hear you say do this do that
you said i was fat jamie is dumb and dave sits on his thumb
now thats not fair we sit there listening to you complane and blame but never about yourself
Listen to me can you see we're ***** off
you not only drove yourself to drink you drove us to
People wonder why we live like this people think we're rebels we don't complane or blame much but when it comes to life we blame you
we're letting go of the clutch we're going to do this will you miss us?
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Re: Will You Miss Us
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Monday, 16th August 2004 @ 03:37:15 PM AEST (User
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I see now where the sage advice came from. Great understanding of life. Nicely done here!
Angel always...godspeed my friend...joni 0:-) |
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Re: Will You Miss Us
(User Rating: 1 ) by Solnubis on
Monday, 16th August 2004 @ 04:32:43 PM AEST (User
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| Nicely written and to the point. |
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