|
 Menu
|
|
|
|
|
Social
|
|
|
|
|
Tired
Contributed by
Elf
on
Monday, 16th August 2004 @ 03:27:51 PM in AEST
Topic:
toughstuff
|
For years I've run this race.
A load of * if you ask.
It's brought me nothing but sorrow.
Naught but regret of the past.
I'm tired of people judging;
taking false images of me.
I'm tired of this *.
Open your eyes and you'll see.
People telling lies;
Living lives of such deceit.
I can't help but be exausted
when this * does repeat.
I think I'll end it now.
I put the blade up to my wrist.
Then I think of you.
I think of how much I'll be missed.
So I fall into your arms.
Tired, but not alone.
You may never know how much I love you.
Despite how weary I have grown.
Copyright ©
Elf
... [
2004-08-16 15:27:51]
(Date/Time posted on
site)
Advertisments:
|
|
|
|
|
|
Sorry, comments are no longer allowed for anonymous, please register for a free membership to access this feature and more
|
|
All comments are owned by the poster. Your Poetry
Dot Com is not responsible for the content of any
comment.
That said, if you find an offensive comment, please
contact via the FeedBack Form with details, including poem title
etc.
|
|
|
Re: Tired
(User Rating: 1 )
by afterdark on
Friday, 7th January 2005 @ 09:53:03 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
| You almost had me liking this..Weary??I grew weary of reading this one. |
|
|
Re: Tired
(User Rating: 1 )
by Essentially9 on
Saturday, 3rd June 2006 @ 10:25:45 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
| this is a bit long, so i do agree with afterdark. i think that you could have made this more powerful with cutting out some lines. i love the ending. i dont know what the asterisks are for either, so those got annoying. and as for the whole suicidal bit in this, there never seemed to be good enough justification for it, and i felt no emotion whatsoever in this. |
|
|
|
· 
Poetry
Community
Members
Areas
Reference
Search
Top
Others
