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Light The Spark
Contributed by
Mortis-Dark
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Monday, 16th August 2004 @ 03:46:40 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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I know in my mind there exist's this meleody.
The grinding of the organs pipes.
The harsh silence that soons follows.
For its fear, will surely swollow you whole.
In the grave lies a man.
Bones that are witherd.
Tall and thin.
This picture flows through my mind.
Relapsing and collapsing with time.
Its muddy remains.
The coldness in the dark.
Light the spark to ignite the fuse.
Use the lighter no one knew.
Kill a tree.and hang a saint.
Carve your skin til the fresh grows faint.
Bite your tongue and taste its blood.
Drag a body up above.
From ashes to ashes and lust before dusk.
Kill the beast.
Let it rust.
For I have came and went the same.
Lodge my figure in your brain.
Oooze and soothe the cuts and wounds.
Kill me now.
Just kill it now.
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Mortis-Dark
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2004-08-16 15:46:40]
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Re: Light The Spark
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by bobotheclown on
Monday, 16th August 2004 @ 11:32:09 PM AEST
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Your a liar... This had a lot of emotion in it and was well written has whole... despite some spelling mistakes.
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Re: Light The Spark
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by TaintedSoul on
Wednesday, 22nd December 2004 @ 09:18:35 AM AEST
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Emotionally sinister, and leaves quite an image in the mind. Enjoyed.
peace
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Re: Light The Spark
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by Essentially9 on
Saturday, 3rd June 2006 @ 10:00:02 PM AEST
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| i think this poem is quite excellent. i loved everything about this poem except you saying have came. you had great rhythm and a nice parody. i loved your style completely and your lines were magnificent. wonderful concepts and a nice fast pace. i dont think any other pace would have worked for this. powerful poem. |
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