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silent storm

Contributed by 8kiwi8 on Monday, 16th August 2004 @ 04:38:59 PM in AEST
Topic: Grief



Flash!
in the sky,where did that come from?

Flash!
in my head,where has she come from?

Rain,pouring,grabbing my face and body tight
...then falling away from me

Memories,pictures clutching so tight in my mind it seems real
...then falling away from me

Flash!
i can see it, but I can't hear the rumbling

Flash!
i can see her, but why can't I hear her?

It lights up the sky to transform darkness into daytime for only one-split-second

She lights up ME to transform darkness into happiness for only one-split-second

And it's dark again

How long is it going to be dark?

I want the sun but i can't stop the rain

I want her but I can't stop the truth

When is this storm going to be over?

I miss the sun




Copyright © 8kiwi8 ... [ 2004-08-16 16:38:59]
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Re: silent storm (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 16th August 2004 @ 06:58:08 PM AEST
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good effect hun, i kno the feeling...its like it springs on suddenly, when ur trying to carry on...*hugs*
-j x x x x x


Re: silent storm (User Rating: 1 )
by Dierna on Monday, 16th August 2004 @ 07:29:06 PM AEST
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*nods repeatedly* I agree so much.....that's how it is a lot with me.....very good write. very very good write. *nods*




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