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A Hero Well Known
Contributed by
Eve
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Monday, 16th August 2004 @ 05:03:24 PM in AEST
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Beyond these days, when most of you have gone
Every one of you having found a future
(For I'm stubborn enough to stay until the last leaves)
Elation will come to me when I see your name, written 'cross the sky
As I find myself pausing to watch another sunfall
(Result of my still dreaming spirit.)
Loved you shall be, a hero well known
Every song of yours sung loudly; and I as well will
Smile (Know that I was never meant to be the stuff of heroes) -
Singing your songs, because you deserve them so.
Copyright ©
Eve
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Re: A Hero Well Known
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 16th August 2004 @ 05:11:22 PM AEST
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Beautiful, and harmonic. You are a bard, I didn't know . . .
I'm sure the hero will be renowned with eulogies like this. Well written. I like it. |
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Re: A Hero Well Known
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 16th August 2004 @ 05:34:28 PM AEST
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I as well will
Smile (Know that I was never meant to be the stuff of heroes) -
Singing your songs, because you deserve them so
These lines were especially meaningful to me - Nice job. |
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Re: A Hero Well Known
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by xxbreathlessx on
Monday, 16th August 2004 @ 05:44:18 PM AEST
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i really liked how you did this. and i agree with the other comment
Smile (Know that I was never meant to be the stuff of heroes) -
Singing your songs, because you deserve them so.
those are spectacular lines. |
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Re: A Hero Well Known
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by Nazmythian on
Tuesday, 17th August 2004 @ 12:47:20 PM AEST
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An incredible write, Eve !! Such an awesome sentiment. Just beautiful.
Nazmythian ~ |
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Re: A Hero Well Known
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by Draconian on
Tuesday, 17th August 2004 @ 01:05:12 PM AEST
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*insert awed and numb sort of look at the computer screen here*
I am GOING to steal your pen one day, I swear . . . but then, it'd be useless without the hand and mind that guides it. Well, after you're rich and famous for your amazing poetry maybe I could sell it on e-bay >> . . .
This is just amazing, and it's a feeling I know well that you depict perfectly (like always). Like mjgrl, I'm in love with the last 2 1/2 lines . . . wow.
Remind me to show a poem-fragment by name of Catalyst on msn, sometime, should you so desire ^^.
don't you dare ever stop writing or I'll never send you a Sugarcult song again =D,
Trudy/Nora. |
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Re: A Hero Well Known
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by Draconian on
Tuesday, 17th August 2004 @ 01:06:40 PM AEST
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dammit. I keep DOING that. Grrr . . .
Anyhow, yeah, it's Nora *rolls eyes*. |
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Re: A Hero Well Known
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by theMoth on
Saturday, 28th August 2004 @ 03:08:55 PM AEST
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| I read this. I liked your tile and use of that theme throughout. --Mothy |
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Re: A Hero Well Known
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by Rissa on
Sunday, 26th September 2004 @ 12:11:46 PM AEST
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| This is awesome, Eve, plain and simple. One of my favorites from you - and that's saying a lot, as I'm yet to find anything of yours that I dislike. |
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Re: A Hero Well Known
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by Vitreous_Soul on
Thursday, 15th December 2005 @ 02:46:28 AM AEST
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...I would like to meet this hero. Do elaborate for me some day, if you would like.
This is the most uplifting poem i've seen you write. Each word is heartfelt and falls into place, as the pieces of a beautiful puzzle.
Keep writing (and i'll be fearless),
-V.S. |
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