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illusion
Contributed by
xxbreathlessx
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Monday, 16th August 2004 @ 05:37:22 PM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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softly whispering,
tenderly singing,
numbly calling,
gently convincing.
Rings through the melody of air,
swims through the waters of self destruction,
talking with the mountain of despair,
and playing with fragile emotions.
The concept so many dwell....
The taunting illusion of freedom
-- From Ourselves --
Copyright ©
xxbreathlessx
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2004-08-16 17:37:22]
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Re: illusion
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by Nazmythian on
Tuesday, 17th August 2004 @ 12:52:54 PM AEST
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I REALLY like that. For while freedom can be found in many forms, I can never be free of ... ME. That is really good !!!
Nazmythian ~ |
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Re: illusion
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by AspenGlow on
Sunday, 22nd August 2004 @ 06:35:39 PM AEST
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Beautiful poem, and so true.
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