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FEED
Contributed by
Alina
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Monday, 16th August 2004 @ 07:37:25 PM in AEST
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The wild things roam the earth
While the tamers on the leash
They whip, cut and slash
The tamers beg please
It doesn't feel good to be treated like this
The tamers cry and suffering is what they release
Maybe the tamer can survive
If only the beating would not be so wild
This is what society FEEDS to their CHILD???
Copyright ©
Alina
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2004-08-16 19:37:25]
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Re: FEED
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by silverjade on
Monday, 16th August 2004 @ 08:07:28 PM AEST
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| very true, nice poem |
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Re: FEED
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by Archie on
Thursday, 19th August 2004 @ 08:08:28 PM AEST
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| I feel the same way. I wish that we could teach our children about love and peace and not have them bombarded by so much violence as they are today. (I don't have any children of my own but I see the result just the same. |
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Re: FEED
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by buchi on
Monday, 18th October 2004 @ 04:09:08 PM AEST
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| The poem is nearly perfect in its way- the thoughts striking and natural- |
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