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What The Story's about
Contributed by
Luka
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Monday, 16th August 2004 @ 09:15:27 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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I dug a hole
So deep i cant get out
No matter how much i scream and shout
My voice isn't loud enough to carry out
That's what the story's about
I'm lost in a dream
That you dreamed
That now i am dreamimg
And i can't get out
It's so dark you cant see the end
Air is thick with dust
Where do i begin
Loneliness is killing me slowly
These words are all i have left to feel
My world starts to dissolve
And i start to fall
Nothing becomes real
Everything i touch
I can not feel
I'm lost in the hole inside of me
I dug a hole
So deep i can't get out
No matter how much i scream and shout
My voice isen't loud enough to carry out
That's what the story's about
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Luka
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2004-08-16 21:15:27]
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Re: What The Story's about
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by Luinil on
Monday, 10th January 2005 @ 08:14:34 AM AEST
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