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Every....
Contributed by
fallin_angel_lover
on
Monday, 16th August 2004 @ 10:08:33 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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Every day is so short,
Every night is so long.
Ever since you left.
I hate being by myself,
I'm so lonely,
I wish I would die.
You call me or send me a letter,
and everything is much better.
Then one day you wrote to me,
To say good-bye forever.
Every time I hear your voice,
I hear it all falling apart.
I'm sorry about all this,
but its time we said good-bye.
I know I should let go,
I know I shouldn't care.
But after everything we've done,
every where we've went,
I wish I could die.
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fallin_angel_lover
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2004-08-16 22:08:33]
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Re: Every....
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by corrupted_minds on
Tuesday, 17th August 2004 @ 05:45:22 AM AEST
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I understand how you feel so much... good write i think you did this one perfectly.
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Re: Every....
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by corrupted_minds on
Tuesday, 17th August 2004 @ 05:45:29 AM AEST
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I understand how you feel so much... good write i think you did this one perfectly.
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Re: Every....
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 31st December 2006 @ 02:20:48 PM AEST
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even if i didn't know how you feel...you explained it perfectly. "every" word...i could feel the pain, the anger, "every" emotion put into perfect perspective. beautiful. truly, frighteningly beautiful.
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