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peter
Contributed by
blackholesun
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Monday, 16th August 2004 @ 10:08:56 PM in AEST
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kill me if you hate me someday without your love just wont stay,
hurt me if you need to feel love is pain and pain is real,
tell me to shut up when you are anoyed my own sanity is destroyed
scream at me when you need to vent after all you pay the rent,
screw someone else when youre tired of me come back home and me 4 free,
love me when you need it back all this attention cant keep track,
see you in 5minutes nothing looks wrong?i sit all alone but with you singing depressions song.....
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Re: peter
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by deadheadpoet on
Thursday, 2nd September 2004 @ 12:39:03 AM AEST
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| WOW. Britt I dig this. It bites and I can relate in so many ways from times past. Just remember my friend, most important thing love yourself! |
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Re: peter
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by Nazmythian on
Sunday, 3rd October 2004 @ 08:30:04 PM AEST
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The worst feelings of loneliness most often present themselves when the one you love sits right before you and doesn't recognise the emotion that is burning inside ... A powerful write and thank you for your remarks on A Memo From My Heart. I do see some similarities here. Well written
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