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the key
Contributed by
pickledchrunchies
on
Monday, 16th August 2004 @ 11:16:15 PM in AEST
Topic:
ambiguous
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i know who i am
i know who i want to be
but still i am stuck
in this reality
why can't we ever
meet eye to eye?
the two of me
won't ever one be
my sight obscured;
only shades of gray;
in the superficial
world i must stay
my own mind,
belonging not to me,
jails my true form;
my heart is never free
one has the key;
He yearns to show
me the way to
a new garden sow
i see His love-
i see the key-
i know who i am
and that is who i want to be
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2004-08-16 23:16:15]
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Re: the key
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by Lessa on
Tuesday, 17th August 2004 @ 02:03:16 AM AEST
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| i really like this, it has so many meanings behind it |
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Re: the key
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by Pyrofungus on
Thursday, 16th September 2004 @ 07:25:37 PM AEST
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great poem bro...I've also wrote about a key...it's called My Pain is Under Key...check it out if you want...
please comment on my work too
summer |
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Re: the key
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by ladyfawn on
Thursday, 16th September 2004 @ 07:30:05 PM AEST
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beautiful, keep 'em comin' hugs n' love nessa
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