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I can't wait to be me
Contributed by
the_story_of_the_year
on
Monday, 16th August 2004 @ 11:24:40 PM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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I lost the key to unlock my head
I don't want to be, so I stare instead
There's only one way for me to feel the warmth
But like a drug it settles, then I hurt much more
4 seconds of freedom isn't worth the time
That I spend frozen in my mind
Whoever has this cage around my soul
Please leave, please go
Leave me alone
If you can open me up to the world that I see
I will love you forever
I can't wait to be me
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2004-08-16 23:24:40]
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Re: I can't wait to be me
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by corrupted_minds on
Tuesday, 17th August 2004 @ 03:42:36 AM AEST
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I can really feel the emotions you are trying to get across. Good Write.
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Re: I can't wait to be me
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 17th August 2004 @ 09:00:02 AM AEST
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| The opening line really draws one into the poem; this poem seems so well-written. |
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Re: I can't wait to be me
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 3rd June 2006 @ 09:56:50 PM AEST
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awesome, truly amazing
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