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Renewal
Contributed by
pastiche247
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Tuesday, 17th August 2004 @ 02:55:40 PM in AEST
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He wears me out then,
With a glance,
Renews me
Tidies up in
Unexpected moments,
Wrecks the place in others
He often slouches,
Always stands up
Solid, for his dreams:
He sometimes listens to advice
At others, simply grows,
Chewing through the meat of life
I hear myself at times
As others hear my father
Peeking out of me
Its hard to keep my dreams at bay:
To let him form,
To let him be
We live in self reflecting worlds:
Secret gardens shared by
Invitation
He whispers to his mother,
Beats his chest with me,
Traces on his girlfriends skin
He is my one foundation,
He is my true romance
Everything I ever wished to give
This son who wears me out then,
With a glance,
Renews me
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Re: Renewal
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 17th August 2004 @ 03:41:28 PM AEST
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We live in self reflecting worlds:
Secret gardens shared
An astouding write. This is a glorious display of passion and truth. Great work! |
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Re: Renewal
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 17th August 2004 @ 03:41:33 PM AEST
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We live in self reflecting worlds:
Secret gardens shared
An astouding write. This is a glorious display of passion and truth. Great work! |
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Re: Renewal
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 17th August 2004 @ 03:41:40 PM AEST
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We live in self reflecting worlds:
Secret gardens shared
An astouding write. This is a glorious display of passion and truth. Great work! |
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Re: Renewal
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 17th August 2004 @ 03:42:03 PM AEST
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We live in self reflecting worlds:
Secret gardens shared
An astouding write. This is a glorious display of passion and truth. Great work! |
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Re: Renewal
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 17th August 2004 @ 03:42:32 PM AEST
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We live in self reflecting worlds:
Secret gardens shared
An astouding write. This is a glorious display of passion and truth. Great work! |
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Re: Renewal
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by Archie on
Tuesday, 17th August 2004 @ 03:49:59 PM AEST
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| This is a great write. I enjoyed it a lot. |
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Re: Renewal
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by Nazmythian on
Tuesday, 17th August 2004 @ 05:05:07 PM AEST
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I have a mother, No really I do, and though you might think it sounds self serving ... I assure it is not as she has three other children as well, I would very much like to send a copy of this to her. I know it would be adored. My younger brother has been a bit more than a handfull of late. This is wonderful writing !!
Nazmythian ~ |
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