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Love Chase
Contributed by
yellow_sundragon
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Tuesday, 17th August 2004 @ 04:31:14 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Goddess, hear my voice,
I wanna know if this was your choice.
I bow before you to face it all
I stand here, ready to take this fall.
Tell me, Wise One, is this a jest?
For now things are really messed.
I can't get her out of my head,
Yet it's him who thinks I'm being led.
Did you pick numbers and it was my turn
To fall in love, then crash and burn?
For if you did and that's the case,
Then I refuse to run in this love chase.
I just want him to leave me alone.
That look in his eyes, the hurt tone
Only makes me want to break him in half,
I'm sure you're up there having a laugh.
Then I go home and lay down to sleep,
But thoughts of her run way to deep.
It's time to get up and I haven't shut an eye,
Nothing works, no matter what I try.
I'm not getting rest and I'm a mess,
So I thought that maybe if I confess...
That I love my life but I love you more,
You'd tell me what the hell you're doing this for.
~Jaime Moran~
August 16, 2004
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Re: Love Chase
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by Archie on
Tuesday, 17th August 2004 @ 07:01:11 PM AEST
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| This is a good poem. If this is a true story i hope things work out where you can find true love one day. |
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Re: Love Chase
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by ladyfawn on
Tuesday, 17th August 2004 @ 08:59:43 PM AEST
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| great expression jaime, written beautifully, you know im behind you 1000% and always wish for your happiness, big hugs, much love, ttys, always ness*mum, xoxo.. |
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Re: Love Chase
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 16th November 2004 @ 06:34:59 AM AEST
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Damn, you have no idea how much I have missed your poetry... hell I didn't until now. *bows humbly before your talent*
This is awsome in so many ways. I hate in when you hurt because I can't just reach across the ocean and make you feel better. You'll find the right person because I know no one more worthy of love than you.
*hugs*
Your sister
Becca |
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Re: Love Chase
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 11th January 2005 @ 12:22:30 PM AEST
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| Hey not bad. Actually it doesn't seem all that "sarcastic" to me, but sad poetry doesn't work either. So I guess you put it in the best category. Nice work! Cheers! |
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