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my world this is with a hint of you
Contributed by
taintedorange21
on
Tuesday, 17th August 2004 @ 04:32:03 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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in this twisted world i find you
admiring my roses
you love the way my clouds are shaped
and comment on my bubblegum scented sidewalks
you like how the songs spell your name
how the wind whistles so sweetly
you've always loved the way my stars
gaze into yours
oh how you turn my rivers into oceans
is more than a secret to me
my world forever reeking of you
your carmel complected palm tree
and sweetly scented strawberries
and after my rivers flood
the downpour is so overwhelming you drown
drown in my roses, my clouds
my bubblegum scented sidewalks.
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Re: my world this is with a hint of you
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 17th August 2004 @ 05:46:24 PM AEST
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Wow, A very diffrent way of pytting things, I like it.
You have avery vivid imagination.
Great job! |
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