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Rays of the Sun
Contributed by
Starfriend
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Tuesday, 17th August 2004 @ 09:33:56 PM in AEST
Topic:
FriendshipPoetry
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Tell me, how often do two rays of sunshine meet
Both shining bright, warming, producing smiles
One having been there before, the other not
They meet only for a split second
Leaving memorable traces after themselves
And then parting, going their seperate ways in life
Assured that they'll soon meet again
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2004-08-17 21:33:56]
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Re: Rays of the Sun
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by Tanmaya on
Wednesday, 18th August 2004 @ 02:39:07 AM AEST
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What a lovely thought!
I can understand what you're talking about here. Sometimes, it just takes moments to form a bond with someone. It's a mystery sometimes, but a beautiful one.
Very well-written.
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Re: Rays of the Sun
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 18th August 2004 @ 03:39:24 AM AEST
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I agree with Tanmaya, although I approached this from an entirely scientific perspective, wondering upon the photons and gluons, quarks etc. of our universe.
It was a good read. Had me wondering for a while. Thanks for sharing it with us. |
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