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I AM
Contributed by
oreo_kisses
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Wednesday, 18th August 2004 @ 01:09:32 AM in AEST
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I am a perfectly normal girl who would like her father back
I wonder what it would be like of he was still alive
I hear his whisper in the wind
I see his shadow on the wall
I want him to be alive and healthy again
I am a perfectly normal girl who would like her father back
I pretend he is still alive and talking to me
I feel his presence within me
I touch his stuff to try to remember what he was like
I worry when I forget he will never return
I am a perfectly normal girl who would like her father back
I understand he will never return
I say it doesnt hurt but it does
I dream that he is alive and healthy again
I hope he will never fad in my mind
I am a perfectly normal girl who would like her father back
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Re: I AM
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by emystar on
Wednesday, 18th August 2004 @ 01:24:06 AM AEST
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Very sad but well said and I do know what cha mean. Both my parents are dead but only their phycical body is gone. The spirit-n-soul are forever.
I'm so sorry for your loss.
luv, huggs, strength,
emy |
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Re: I AM
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by venkat on
Wednesday, 18th August 2004 @ 01:27:25 AM AEST
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| Very nice..a heart touching write.. venkat |
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Re: I AM
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by ps_ihateyou on
Wednesday, 18th August 2004 @ 02:05:27 AM AEST
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| i'm in the same exact situation as you and i couldn't have put it better myself. great job. |
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