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''We've Got One Over You!''
Contributed by
deathdrop
on
Wednesday, 18th August 2004 @ 11:47:09 AM in AEST
Topic:
schoolproblems
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Do you know how much i'm hurting now?
Do you know how much i'm crying?
Endless rivers are falling down!
And i've just given up trying...
There's such an empty pain inside me.
Such a worthless and hated feeling.
Nunbness controls my emotions.
All I want to do is die bleeding.
Because, I haven't got the strength,
To fight these poxy little rows...
It's all hurting my head.
They're just b*tchy little cows!
But it don't make me feel any better,
Since, i'm the one that'll snap!
I'm really at my teather!
I'm gonna do damage with this smack!
... And then that will be asult!
But like i'll actually care!
But i'll have to, 'coz they'll say it's my fault!
The fact that THEY made me tare!!!
I HATE this twisted feeling,
Of knowing there's nothing I can do!
They're speaking their words inside my head.
"WE'VE GOT ONE OVER YOU!"
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deathdrop
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2004-08-18 11:47:09]
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Re: ''We've Got One Over You!''
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by Alina on
Wednesday, 18th August 2004 @ 12:07:33 PM AEST
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This poem kinda made me laugh. I left a comment on one of your other poems and I have gone through the "bullies" at school. I lived in a ghetto and in middle school some gangbanger wannabes started messing with me. I always kept to myself until one day I just went to one of the girls and hit her. After that I started getting involved with gangs myself and by highschool I was on probation... and a well known gang member and those chicks never f***ed with me after a couple more fights and rumbles. Either way..... it is all not worht it. Kick their ass if you have to so they know to finally leave you alone. You can't let people walk all over you...... but don't take it to the extreme like I did and get felony charges and S***. Well, this is long...... if you ever need advice or want to talk send me a message.
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Re: ''We've Got One Over You!''
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by corrupted_minds on
Thursday, 19th August 2004 @ 06:14:36 AM AEST
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I feel this soo much.. right deep inside..awesome write.
love always
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Re: ''We've Got One Over You!''
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by buchi on
Monday, 18th October 2004 @ 04:28:04 PM AEST
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| the tone of contemplative melancholy which pervades the poem...is commendable |
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