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Do You Know How This Feels?
Contributed by
iluvpencils
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Wednesday, 18th August 2004 @ 03:10:32 PM in AEST
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Do you know how it feels,
to wake up everyday and
hope to God she's still alive?
Do you know how it feels
to lie to your best friend?
To tell her those are only cat scratches
on your arm?
Do you know how hard it is,
hugging your arms to your side;
praying no one notices?
Do you know those thoughts,
the ones I have against my will?
Have you ever daydreamed of drowning?
Have you felt the pain inside me?
Consantly lingering,
reminding me of the lies,
Slowly swallowing me
Do you know how it feels to hate?
Genuinely, wishing everyone would just die
Have you ever been alone?
Lost, crying out for some one,
Anyone who undersands,
Silently?
Do you know what it's like to be me?
I could show you
But you'd run
Grip this blade
don't hesitate,
Drag it across your flesh
Shiver at the sight of blood
Now, you know
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iluvpencils
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2004-08-18 15:10:32]
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Re: Do You Know How This Feels?
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by Chade on
Wednesday, 18th August 2004 @ 03:16:39 PM AEST
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thats a really gd read. Iv got a m8 who does the whole wrist cutting thing for a relise, but as you said I would run from it and hide in a hole.
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Re: Do You Know How This Feels?
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by Katie2008 on
Wednesday, 18th August 2004 @ 06:19:25 PM AEST
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This write was very good. I can relate to that. It reminds me of one of my poems. I like it. Thanks for sharing.
Katie |
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Re: Do You Know How This Feels?
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by clotti on
Sunday, 17th October 2004 @ 11:46:42 AM AEST
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| i like this. i know how cutting can be a release and i know how its secretive, and how many people run. This is a really well written poem and i like the way that so many emotions have been expressed. keep writing for it is truely inspirational |
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