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Forgiven, But Not Forgotten
Contributed by
eatfresh22
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Wednesday, 18th August 2004 @ 03:20:28 PM in AEST
Topic:
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As pain presently persists
Tears suffocated in my soul
Anguish alive in my midst
Forgetfulness my truest goal.
Guilt consumes my being.
To forgive must one forget?
Forget all of the tormenting,
Where pain and sadness met?
Through a power not my own
I forgave the hurtful you.
The most hate that I've ever know
Is gone, my heart's been made anew.
Thanks to the King of Kings
My heart no longer hates.
But on the inside tears are falling
To grieve of this forever ache.
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Re: Forgiven, But Not Forgotten
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by sweetangeluk on
Wednesday, 18th August 2004 @ 03:26:26 PM AEST
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How wonderfully you expressed the words
(HUGS) sent your way
Terrific yet sad poem
All the best
Love Sweetangelukxxx |
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Re: Forgiven, But Not Forgotten
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by Chade on
Wednesday, 18th August 2004 @ 03:28:53 PM AEST
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beautifuly written. Through this poem your have convayed your pain, but can anybody every forgive and forget?
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Re: Forgiven, But Not Forgotten
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 18th August 2004 @ 05:11:12 PM AEST
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| This is a dilemma, and one I face as well. You don't forget, but I think putting it behind you with forgiveness is the first step forward. |
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Re: Forgiven, But Not Forgotten
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by ShadowDaughter on
Wednesday, 18th August 2004 @ 06:29:07 PM AEST
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Wow . . . this is so raw, so painful, so wrenchingly honest it's almost hard to read . . . this is beautiful, this is in a sense almost inspiring, my heart is aching here, and there's really nothing more to say.
hugs,
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Re: Forgiven, But Not Forgotten
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by Fionndruinne on
Wednesday, 18th August 2004 @ 06:39:02 PM AEST
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All blessings to you as you walk the road to forgiveness and healing. It's a hard road, because it's something against our human nature. But as you said, it's not our own strength. All we have to do is keep putting one foot after the other ahead on the road.
Excellent piece.
Andrew |
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Re: Forgiven, But Not Forgotten
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by shelby on
Wednesday, 18th August 2004 @ 11:27:59 PM AEST
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a very moving piece
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Re: Forgiven, But Not Forgotten
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by Wachumiri on
Thursday, 19th August 2004 @ 01:28:35 AM AEST
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I really hate it when he puts you through all that pain. I can see it all over your face. Hear it in your voice. Your pain does pain me.
Take care, no Love.
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Re: Forgiven, But Not Forgotten
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by pixie on
Thursday, 19th August 2004 @ 08:25:47 AM AEST
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a very wpnderfully expressed, emotional poem, I am truly sorry for your pain *hugs*
pixie xx |
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Re: Forgiven, But Not Forgotten
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by faith_my_eyes on
Saturday, 28th August 2004 @ 01:13:19 PM AEST
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| I understand the struggle to forgive a parent who has hurt you. Well done. |
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by faith_my_eyes on
Saturday, 28th August 2004 @ 01:13:19 PM AEST
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| I understand the struggle to forgive a parent who has hurt you. Well done. |
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