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Everything I Hate
Contributed by
CrimsonTears
on
Wednesday, 18th August 2004 @ 06:44:53 PM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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Ive become what I hate
Everything I never thought Id be
I look into the mirror everyday
And I dont like what I see
Ive just become so fake
Hiding all that I feel
Holding it all inside
Locking it with a seal
No one knows my pain
Or the things I go through
I dont want to let them in
Id be too afraid if they knew
So everyday I put on a thousand masks
So no one can see into my lifeless eyes
and see into my dying soul
But I dont worry, because no one even tries
No one tries to see if Im hiding
They like who they think I am
So Ill let them keep on believing
Keep believing in my little sham
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2004-08-18 18:44:53]
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Re: Everything I Hate
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by Jenni_K on
Wednesday, 18th August 2004 @ 06:56:16 PM AEST
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This is really sad, but so well written...I can feel your pain..... You should try to get rid of the masks tho..... People should like you for who you are..not who they'd like you to be..
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Re: Everything I Hate
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by Delusions on
Thursday, 19th August 2004 @ 12:41:05 AM AEST
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| wow i love this!!! I understand what this feels like, its something i live dat to day! Keep up the good work!!! ~Delusions~ |
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Re: Everything I Hate
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by EternalNight4x on
Monday, 15th November 2004 @ 05:37:37 PM AEST
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| excellent write I can relate to this oh too well...its like every day you have to hide how you truly feel for fear of how others will react..keep up the great writing |
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