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Tasted Kisses
Contributed by
ShadowsCloud
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Friday, 1st November 2002 @ 08:20:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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If kisses are blown,
kisses are wasted.
Kisses aren't kisses,
unless they are tasted.
In my dream,
you blew me a kiss.
I started to cry,
for what was amiss.
You started to frown,
and wiped my tears.
You tried to ease,
all of my fears.
Then you realized,
what you had done.
You'd given me a kiss,
with none of the fun.
So you gave me a taste,
of your sweet lips.
Your drank me in,
with tiny little sips.
Into my mouth,
your tongue did slide.
My tongue met yours,
not wanting to hide.
This kiss we shared,
it seemed to be the best.
We simply had,
to put it to the test.
You kissed me again,
quick as a wink.
It was so intense,
I could not think.
Now we know,
why it is said:
If kisses are blown,
kisses are wasted.
Kisses aren't kisses,
unless they are tasted.
Copyright ©
ShadowsCloud
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2002-11-01 20:20:00]
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Re: Tasted Kisses
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by Fwog on
Friday, 1st November 2002 @ 09:20:02 PM AEST
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Welcome ShadowsCloud,
This is a wonderful write, congrats,
and keep em coming
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Re: Tasted Kisses
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by OreO on
Friday, 1st November 2002 @ 10:28:21 PM AEST
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This is so beautiful
I enjoyed reading this alot
Keep em' coming i'd like
to read more
.::´¯`·..· OreO·..·´¯`::. |
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Re: Tasted Kisses
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by sweetolbaby on
Saturday, 2nd November 2002 @ 02:47:40 AM AEST
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So beautiful and I can really really really relate to this! Keep on writing
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Re: Tasted Kisses
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by unpredictable on
Saturday, 2nd November 2002 @ 01:33:59 PM AEST
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| great write. . .i like this poem |
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Re: Tasted Kisses
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by fancyface4898 on
Saturday, 9th November 2002 @ 04:46:44 AM AEST
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| Simply beautiful I am so happy you shared it |
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Re: Tasted Kisses
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by Unaekseveer1 on
Tuesday, 19th November 2002 @ 12:21:35 PM AEST
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This is so true and wonderfully expressed here Candice,
these such kisses are still the clearest, but at the time such total brain scattering moments, to me!
This poem of yours has me dreamily smiling again! Thankyou for sharing.
With love
Dean:-) |
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Re: Tasted Kisses
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by ShadowsCloud on
Tuesday, 19th November 2002 @ 03:56:27 PM AEST
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Dean, I am so glad that you like it. Those kinds of kisses have the same effect on me.
Thanks of you comment.
ShadowsCloud |
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Re: Tasted Kisses
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by wordsy on
Tuesday, 29th April 2003 @ 10:25:24 PM AEST
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Words well woven. I love your style here, it reminds me of when I was younger and thought that love was just for fun.
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Re: Tasted Kisses
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by ShadowsCloud on
Sunday, 4th May 2003 @ 11:45:40 PM AEST
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I am glad that you liked it. Thank you for you comment.
ShadowsCloud |
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