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You Could Dream
Contributed by
lilch4ever
on
Wednesday, 18th August 2004 @ 07:38:45 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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You could dream a thousand
times but that dream may
never be reality.
You could dream a thousand
times but the dream never
fades.
You could dream a thousand
times and watch your life
shatter before your eyes.
You could dream a thousand
times yet the fantasy never
stops replaying.
You could dream a thousand
times and life becomes a
confusing whirlpool or a spinning
roller coaster.
You could dream a thousand
times, yet if it ever came true you
may not be the person you
thought you'd always be.
You could chase the dream so much
until the dream no longer
chases you.
Written By: Charlene
Copyright ©
lilch4ever
... [
2004-08-18 19:38:45]
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Re: You Could Dream
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by InnerBeautyQueen on
Wednesday, 18th August 2004 @ 08:02:40 PM AEST
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| good poem |
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Re: You Could Dream
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by Joan on
Friday, 8th October 2004 @ 05:25:30 PM AEST
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| neat and fantastic poem. You might consider delting or changing the first line a bit...it seems too much..."you could dream a thousand times". It is good write though |
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Re: You Could Dream
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by Ronald on
Thursday, 14th October 2004 @ 02:42:44 AM AEST
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| A nice poem! Like the ending. |
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