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open
Contributed by
feathercut
on
Thursday, 19th August 2004 @ 12:11:55 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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OPEN,
my heart is beating
on the door
crumbled letters to explore
carved too deep to endure
OPEN
if i do youll run away
like the rest that feared to stay
squirmish at my bloody scars
i must share them to heal
a secret only you can feel
OPEN
you tear your clothing at my sight
but not to mourn
to share the fight
so we are one tonight
OPEN
do not hide the skin you bare
for what is real
is the beauty of defeit
an acception so complete
let us wither on this street
pedals fall to fast
our stems bend to last
OPEN
well never break
only tare
the price to pay
because we dare
to open
Copyright ©
feathercut
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2004-08-19 00:11:55]
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Re: open
(User Rating: 1 )
by m3 on
Tuesday, 12th October 2004 @ 11:47:52 PM AEST
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| More people should read this...It is very true . I think it points out the reisks and leaves it up to teh reader to decide if they should take them or not. Very good |
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