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Tears in the Dark
Contributed by
Buggsy
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Thursday, 19th August 2004 @ 02:03:16 AM in AEST
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Haiku
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As the darkness falls,
One last thought shall end it all,
Crying as Death comes.
Copyright ©
Buggsy
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2004-08-19 02:03:16]
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Re: Tears in the Dark
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by Avarice_Riot on
Thursday, 19th August 2004 @ 03:45:44 AM AEST
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| So much depth compressed into so few lines. Great write, please keep them coming. |
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Re: Tears in the Dark
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by Pyrofungus on
Saturday, 25th September 2004 @ 11:00:15 AM AEST
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Very good bro!...there does always seem to be that last thought that ends it all and it always leads to death...
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