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Dark Thoughts
Contributed by
Hakiokusaken
on
Thursday, 19th August 2004 @ 02:23:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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If I could fly away and never turn back
away from this hideous life I am at
these two sharp knives would be my wings
to slit these wrists and end all things
this stupid life is way too hard
its left my body with grotesque scars
I guess i'm weaker then I said
if I was stronger I wouldn't be dead
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Hakiokusaken
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2004-08-19 02:23:00]
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Re: Dark Thoughts
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by corrupted_minds on
Thursday, 19th August 2004 @ 04:24:39 AM AEST
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Good write, the ending was a lovely touch to it. Keep up your good work.
Love always
corrupted_minds
p.s Thank you also to commenting on my poetry it keeps me going. |
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Re: Dark Thoughts
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by deathdrop on
Thursday, 19th August 2004 @ 05:28:16 AM AEST
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very powerful poem. i know just how you feel though...
keep your chin up, you're an excellent writer!
DON'T PUT YOUR SKILL TO WASTE!!! |
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