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The Nightmare
Contributed by
jesika
on
Thursday, 19th August 2004 @ 02:46:40 AM in AEST
Topic:
fictional
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A tourtured, broken heart
A mauled and broken soul
My presence and my sanity
Is what everyone stole
With everything I've seen
And everything I've done
I know that my battles
Are much less than won
I fall to the ground
Wondering if I should rise
Or let myself lie here
To wait for me to die
A single, silent tear
Comes running down my face
I can't move though I want to
I feel so out of place
So as I lay here and wonder
What is happening
A light begins to flood the room
And someone begins to sing
So I start to quietly
Say an almost silent prayer
I start to feel uneasy
I know that you're there
I begin to scream at you
For you to go away
And as I lay there screaming motionless
I continue to pray
I see you getting closer
Slipping silently across the floor
I watch you move right past me
And slide right out the door
I stay still and silent
Cold, alone and scared
I open my eyes to find that I
Have awoken from my nightmare.
Copyright ©
jesika
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2004-08-19 02:46:40]
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Re: The Nightmare
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by Avarice_Riot on
Thursday, 19th August 2004 @ 03:00:37 AM AEST
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Very, very nice...simple words but very easy to relate to. I like the twist at the ending too - most poems relating to nightmares that I've read stay within the nightmare and don't go beyond that to the waking up part. I enjoyed this unique take a lot, keep on writing!
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Re: The Nightmare
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by emystar on
Thursday, 19th August 2004 @ 03:27:15 AM AEST
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It's very good 'cause in the nite mare u knew to pray. I've actually woke up in the nite rebuking demons in my dreams but be talking out loud.
Great writing.
luv, huggs,
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