|
 Menu
|
|
|
|
|
Social
|
|
|
|
|
lies
Contributed by
dizza_13
on
Thursday, 19th August 2004 @ 04:41:07 AM in AEST
Topic:
limericks
|
There once was a boy who cried,
he cried so much that he died,
his tears turned to blood,
they sank in the mud,
and all this because of a lie.
Copyright ©
dizza_13
... [
2004-08-19 04:41:07]
(Date/Time posted on
site)
Advertisments:
|
|
|
|
|
|
Sorry, comments are no longer allowed for anonymous, please register for a free membership to access this feature and more
|
|
All comments are owned by the poster. Your Poetry
Dot Com is not responsible for the content of any
comment.
That said, if you find an offensive comment, please
contact via the FeedBack Form with details, including poem title
etc.
|
|
|
Re: lies
(User Rating: 1 )
by corrupted_minds on
Thursday, 19th August 2004 @ 05:18:17 AM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
Short, Sharp and sweet love it.. now i'm working on some of my own ideas.
|
|
|
Re: lies
(User Rating: 1 )
by Katie2008 on
Thursday, 19th August 2004 @ 10:33:52 AM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
Well written and right to the point, I love this! Great work!
Katie |
|
|
Re: lies
(User Rating: 1 )
by Hakiokusaken on
Thursday, 19th August 2004 @ 12:19:13 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
Althhough sad this poem is really good. GOOD JOB.
~HAKIOKUSAKEN~ |
|
|
|
· 
Poetry
Community
Members
Areas
Reference
Search
Top
Others
