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Drowning In Love
Contributed by
RhythmBndt
on
Thursday, 19th August 2004 @ 07:44:54 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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There is a depth of love
Many will never know
A pinnacle of passion
Where few ever climb
An intimate art of touch
Some never learn
Some wade into that lover's sea
Others swim or float
But my desire is to
Drown there with you
Pull me with you
Under the crashing waves
Until I lose all consciousness
Of anything but the two of us
Riding a wave of passion so strong
We can no longer fight the undertow
And it's pulsing danger that threatens
To crush us with pleasure
And alter our existence forever
Thunderous roaring
In my heart and body...
Touches so hot that I burn,
Kisses so intense and deep
That I am suffocating
In the sweetness of
Our blended breath and spirits
Pleasure sharper, more real
Than any pain I have known
Touching, kissing secret places
Fueling hot desire
Drowning cold inhibitions
Feasting on love, like those starving
And enjoying their last meal
Submerging, covered, drowning
In love's Herculean waves
Too weak to fight or resist
Going wherever they move us
Let me drown in love's sea
With you, My Love
Covered by its hot depths forever
Ceasing to struggle, floating, drifting
On crashing waves of pleasure
Borne together on their crests
Through days of endless summer
Beneath a blue sky of love
Under a blazing sun of lust
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RhythmBndt
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2004-08-19 07:44:54]
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Re: Drowning In Love
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by Jenni_K on
Thursday, 19th August 2004 @ 07:50:10 AM AEST
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Amazing write....Love the imagery and the metaphors..
Jenni |
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Re: Drowning In Love
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by pixie on
Thursday, 19th August 2004 @ 08:13:13 AM AEST
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a wonderful write,
pixie xx |
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Re: Drowning In Love
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 19th August 2004 @ 08:18:03 AM AEST
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| Whew! Loved the passion in this. wish we could all give ourselves so fully. |
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Re: Drowning In Love
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 19th August 2004 @ 10:53:27 AM AEST
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Whew! *fanning myself* This is passion at its best. I only wish, too, that all love encompassed us this way. Oneday. My oneday awaits.
Thanks for the hope.
Angel always...joni |
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