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BOYHOOD DREAM
Contributed by
wellsmark
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Saturday, 2nd November 2002 @ 06:10:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
Grief
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BOYHOOD DREAM
She was a vision a boyhood dream,
Her eyes melted me with a wicked gleam.
Lascivious lips, the way she walked,
We had so much in common as we talked.
We arranged to meet after class,
She left the caf just after half past.
As she crossed the road a car hit her fast,
I ran to her my mouth aghast.
Chafed hair, eyes shone no more,
I knelt and stroked her tears hit the floor.
She died in my arms I looked up to the sky,
She was so young God, Whats the pointWhy.
The ambulance arrived and took her away,
As I dream I see her slipping away.
One day we will meet, my boyhood dream,
Your eyes can melt me with a wicked gleam.
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wellsmark
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2002-11-02 06:10:00]
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Re: BOYHOOD DREAM
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by OreO on
Saturday, 2nd November 2002 @ 06:34:24 AM AEST
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This was so sad
Beautiful write
Keep em' coming
.::´¯`·..· OreO·..·´¯`::. |
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Re: BOYHOOD DREAM
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by Poetic_Angel on
Saturday, 2nd November 2002 @ 11:49:07 AM AEST
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| this was a sad but great poem. i like it a lot!!!!! |
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Re: BOYHOOD DREAM
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by ShadowsCloud on
Monday, 18th November 2002 @ 08:48:19 AM AEST
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It is so sad, but beautifully written. I like it.
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