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crushed
Contributed by
all4him
on
Thursday, 19th August 2004 @ 07:35:54 PM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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Torn to pieces
By the words spoken
Musta heard you wrong
This isnt you
You'd never change.
You'd never let her rule
You'd never let go of us
You'd never say goodbye
But you did, you changed
You let go of us
You let her rule
You just said your goodbye.
You took wat wa left of you in me
And tore it into the smallest pieces
you riped hope, love and faith out of me.
You took away the part of me
That lived and breathed
You took away You.
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2004-08-19 19:35:54]
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Re: crushed
(User Rating: 1 )
by XPoeticChicX on
Friday, 20th August 2004 @ 04:20:17 AM AEST
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| Beautiful poem...describes my current situation. You can read it in the angry poem section called, "fall"..these definitely are tough times. :( Just when you want or have love......you lose it. |
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