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Something I Don't Have Anymore
Contributed by
MrWrite
on
Saturday, 2nd November 2002 @ 08:15:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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I keep telling myself
that all this fighting
is pointless.
But I just don't seem
to listen very well.
Nowadays, I seem to get mad
at every little thing.
I go out to get away from it all.
And I do get away....for a time.
But whenever I go back
it's always there.
I'm starting to think
that the fighting
is all my fault....again.
Which is why, this time,
I'm not going to go someplace
where I can cause hurt to others.
It's all the same, really.
I've gotten used to it....
I mean it's just one life,
I've left millions of them before,
and I might just leave
millions of them after.
But, then again,
this has been the first place
I've been able to call
home in a long time.
But who am I kidding.
This is my life,
whether I like it....or not.
Moving from place to place,
from life to life,
it's all the same.
The fights always begin
with me and always end with me.
I don't want to live with the fighting....
the endless curses
and shouting matches.
And now, it seems,
I've gotten my wish
to be away from everyone.
It may seem like I'm
spilling out my heart
in this one letter,
but the truth is....
I can't be spilling my heart,
because I don't have one anymore.
Copyright ©
MrWrite
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2002-11-02 08:15:00]
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Re: Something I Don't Have Anymore
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by OreO on
Saturday, 2nd November 2002 @ 08:29:33 AM AEST
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Pain..so much pain
yet absolutely beautiful.
.::´¯`·..· OreO·..·´¯`::.
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Re: Something I Don't Have Anymore
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by Daniela_Maria_Violin on
Saturday, 2nd November 2002 @ 09:56:29 AM AEST
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MrWrite,
This is so sad...:( Just know that you do have a heart , I can see it. If you didn't you wouldn't have so much emotion in these lines and I wouldn't be feeling your pain ... hang in there and keep writing, let it all out... it'll help tons, trust me.
Always,
Daniela
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Re: Something I Don't Have Anymore
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by Lilman on
Wednesday, 6th November 2002 @ 10:23:44 AM AEST
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| It's so strange how dark poetry like this, can turn out so beautiful |
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Re: Something I Don't Have Anymore
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by lilch4ever on
Thursday, 2nd January 2003 @ 04:17:14 PM AEST
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| Blown away from how good this is. You have a way with words excellant. Although its very deep and however very interesting. I sorta feel like you. I can feel your pain. Yet this poem is so sad. Excellant write keep up the good work. And by the one everyone has a heart but they just have to find it :) |
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Re: Something I Don't Have Anymore
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by Saira on
Sunday, 13th July 2003 @ 06:11:10 PM AEST
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A very heartfelt write...woven with pain so deep...and wonderfully written. Well done!
Saira |
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