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Dont Leave Me Alone
Contributed by
CrimsonTears
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Thursday, 19th August 2004 @ 11:12:02 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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You think that you can lock me away
But in the end youll have to pay
All alone I dont know what Ill do
There is so much that I can think through
Leaving me alone to think is not wise
Youd know that if you looked into my dying eyes
My mind is filled with death and pain
Leave me here too long I swear Ill hit a vein
This wont teach me a thing cant you see
Youre only punishing yourself not me
I hold no fear of dying
So you should give up trying
For once hear my hushed voice
And try to make the right choice
Every tear that I cry
Only gives one more reason for me to die
Take away everything I own
But please dont leave me here alone
I know that I wont make it if you do
You dont even have a clue
Please just believe what I say
I really dont want to die today
But that is what will take place
At least all my pain will be erased
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2004-08-19 23:12:02]
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Re: Dont Leave Me Alone
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by Stellar on
Thursday, 19th August 2004 @ 11:45:34 PM AEST
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| There's a lot of emotion in this, part anger and part something sweeter, like the undying need to be loved. I've been there too. If you can find just one reason to get out of bed each day, then it's a day worth living. Great poem by the way. |
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Re: Dont Leave Me Alone
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by MoonlitAngel on
Friday, 20th August 2004 @ 09:34:08 AM AEST
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I really relate to this. Some people, they just don't understand, and they usually end up doing exactly what they shouldn't. This is beautifully written, and believe me, I know pretty much how you feel.
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Re: Dont Leave Me Alone
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by Remy on
Friday, 20th August 2004 @ 11:29:05 PM AEST
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ah yes... the emo ranting plea, heartfelt for sure and well penned. i'm liking this one. ;0)
-remy |
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