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For a friend
Contributed by
corrupted_minds
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Friday, 20th August 2004 @ 06:48:15 AM in AEST
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Both loved and lost,
Still feel the hurt,
We're better than most,
But still feel like dirt,
Both entered the shadows,
But hand in hand,
Still live in the shadows,
But together we stand,
I love you so,
You mean the world to me,
And when we're apart,
It's the love you see,
I'll hold you up,
Never let you fall,
If you need a hand,
Don't be afraid to call,
I do anything for you,
Give my life I would,
Would cry for you,
Whenever I should,
If you were to go,
I'd always cry,
Can't live without you,
I'd rot and die,
So come stand close,
As one we are strong,
If we help each other,
We wont be broken for long....
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Re: For a friend
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by Ilhar on
Friday, 20th August 2004 @ 09:02:45 AM AEST
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wonderful sentiment
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Re: For a friend
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by Jenni_K on
Friday, 20th August 2004 @ 11:44:24 AM AEST
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Touching write...
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Re: For a friend
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by Kindredblood_dragon on
Friday, 20th August 2004 @ 12:19:02 PM AEST
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Love is an emotion hard to fathom, but you found the meaning, within your poem.
Awesome write keep it up. |
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Re: For a friend
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by Dizza_13 on
Friday, 20th August 2004 @ 06:01:52 PM AEST
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:) great write.
love always, dizza
xoxoxo |
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